A Life Vision!

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User offline. Last seen 14 سنة 11 اسبوع ago. Offline
مشترك منذ تاريخ: 03/10/2009

Salam,
I'm new here and thought I shall add something of my writings.. I'm not a writer but I love to write prose once in a while when I'm inspired by something.. so hope you like it and hope you'll all feel it cause its honest.

in an ocean swimming alone..
looking behind there is no way to go back

in front of me nothing but water..
on my own, no one to lend me a hand nor direct me

thoughts attack me !!
will i make it through !! am I going to reach my happily ever after??

am I gonna see the shore again ??
am I gonna see a glimpse of light again??

then I realized, that nowhere in this world is safe enough .. and if I saw the shore .. the shore is full of beasts too.. I shall walk through this ocean fearless and with all my strength..

try to make an island in that ocean if I didn't find the shore..
and my light and hope always gonna be Allah who made me to make a difference..

no real shores in this life.. the real shore is still to come in the hereafter..

I think anyone can relate to this !! or what do you think ??!!
your comments and suggestions are all welcome, well actually very ultra welcome.
Regards.[align=center]

User offline. Last seen 13 سنة 13 اسبوع ago. Offline
مشترك منذ تاريخ: 18/06/2006

Welcome Pearls here in Kulilk
You’ll really enjoy it
Believe me
I hope all the happiness for you here with us
Anyway
Your words are beautiful
I may come back to comment on it
Just wanted to welcome you

User offline. Last seen 14 سنة 11 اسبوع ago. Offline
مشترك منذ تاريخ: 03/10/2009

well hello its really nice of you
thanks a lot
waiting for your comments

صورة  taha's
User offline. Last seen 12 سنة 9 اسبوع ago. Offline
مشترك منذ تاريخ: 05/02/2006

I liked it so much, and hopefully u will manage to have time for providing us with more. Next time I will read it critically to comment on it.

Thanks,

Bye,

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